My Poetry-I am going to give writting poetry a go.Tell me what you think.

~This is who I am~

This is who I am
Take it or leave it
I can not change
to fit your needs
I cannot differ
to please you
Sometimes I talk to loud
Sometimes I walk to slow
Sometimes I play my music
Just a little bit too loud
But this is me
Take me as I am
I can not
and will not change
This is who I am
(not great,but I am tryin)

~Stranger~
There is a stranger
An enemy
Someone that I don't know
There face is dark
And masked from me
They act as if they know me
As if I am a friend
They act as if they
know me
form way back when
I wish I knew this stranger
I long to truely know
Who this enemy
This shadowed figure
This stranger truely is

~Like Me~
This is the best time of our lives
They say
Enjoy this time
For it is short
And soon it will be gone
They say we waist our time
Worrying about the things
That are so insignificant
And mean nothing at all
But do they really remember
Do they really feel
All those dreams
and goals
they had when they were once
like us
If only they could see
How truly
different life would be
If they were someone else
If they were just like me

~Love~
You know you are in love
when just a simple word
can make your heart beat rapid
your stomach starts to flutter
Things begin to blur
And nothing truly matters
Yet when the words are said
Are they truly meant
It is one word we often use
And toss around so simply
Yet it is not a simple word
A casual thing to say
It is a word that changes lives
and smiles everyday
You know you are in love
When even the reality
Of everyhting
Doesn't truely matter

Okay, So now that I have spilled my soul to you... j/k LOL! What do you think? :unsure: (P.S. I may add more at a later date)