HERES a comment! I think your work is wonderful.
Quote:
Everything is fading to black
The stars dim away
And seems they won’t come back
I can’t hear what you say
That was my favorite part, the "fading to black" was really nice, it not only gave some imagery, but since it's a kind of theatrical phrase, it sort of gave the whole piece a sort of dramatic feel... very nice. Keep up the excellent work.
