Hmmm... braiding and waiting... slightly brilliant, b2m!
Excellent work, hpgurl. You are going up on the front page of the thread AS WE SPEAK. Okay, actually in about five minutes. Very original... and nice fleshing out of the story. Sometimes an FF can seem like a connect-the-dots game with dare requirements, but I love it when there is a STORY too
. And explanations for why people randomly act in a certain way.
I am WAY too logical for this genre
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