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allucha · 03-31-2006, 05:06 PM

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Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole

I can't believe you didn't show us the dragons Ali, that's so wrong...I love dragons any time you can write them in you should...

I think you should have written out all of Sirius' adventures...you just told them, but I think it would have been more exciting to read them as a flashback *Ottery is obsessed with flashbacks*

Okay Chapter 10 has me confused? Harry is talking to Wormtail as if he's Voldemort...I would have thought it an accident but you did it throughout the first half of the post...who Harry is he? A doppelganger?

The dragons, well, if I showed them, then you would have expected the roar.
As for Sirius' flashbacks, who say's they won't come in. Well, that's coz they might be able to be made. But maybe in a separate fic *ideas for lotsa weird stuff*
Ah, it seems that Word has been stupid. I highlight the whole thing and copy, it leaves out a line. Anyway, yeah. At first I was going to make someone else say the words *won't say who, but it's pretty obvious* but then I thought how about do it this way.

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Originally Posted by Fortune_Cookie

Suhweet book! lol Wish I had it.

PAMS!

*gives you it* But it's only for dummies, you're not a dummie, are yeh

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Originally Posted by danismine

kool book. animagi for dummies

PAMS so we see him opening that present (although i hope nothing bad)

Roshni

Something bad. Me? I'd never do such a thing. you wait and see

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Originally Posted by Latinhottie13

very good Ali, I loved it. . .keep it up

Lottie

Thanks Lottie!

Hello

Um, yeah. Post, today, hmm. Maybe, um, ok

03-31-2006, 05:06 PM	#315 (permalink)
allucha Niffler Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: SchruckleNoofer! Posts: 20,250 Hogwarts RPG Name: Ana-Marie Aylesworth Third Year	Anyone confused? Me too! Old Man Beans \| "BOY" \| FARM ASSIST\| L u L u \| Derping like a Boss Quote: Originally Posted by OtterySt.Catchpole I can't believe you didn't show us the dragons Ali, that's so wrong...I love dragons any time you can write them in you should... I think you should have written out all of Sirius' adventures...you just told them, but I think it would have been more exciting to read them as a flashback Ottery is obsessed with flashbacks Okay Chapter 10 has me confused? Harry is talking to Wormtail as if he's Voldemort...I would have thought it an accident but you did it throughout the first half of the post...who Harry is he? A doppelganger? The dragons, well, if I showed them, then you would have expected the roar. As for Sirius' flashbacks, who say's they won't come in. Well, that's coz they might be able to be made. But maybe in a separate fic ideas for lotsa weird stuff Ah, it seems that Word has been stupid. I highlight the whole thing and copy, it leaves out a line. Anyway, yeah. At first I was going to make someone else say the words won't say who, but it's pretty obvious but then I thought how about do it this way. Quote: Originally Posted by Fortune_Cookie Suhweet book! lol Wish I had it. PAMS! gives you it But it's only for dummies, you're not a dummie, are yeh Quote: Originally Posted by danismine kool book. animagi for dummies PAMS so we see him opening that present (although i hope nothing bad) Roshni Something bad. Me? I'd never do such a thing. you wait and see Quote: Originally Posted by Latinhottie13 very good Ali, I loved it. . .keep it up Lottie Thanks Lottie! Hello Um, yeah. Post, today, hmm. Maybe, um, ok __________________ there will be dark days ahead, when you feel all alone... __ that's when hope is needed most. No matter how lost you feel ______________________hold on to hope and keep it alive