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OtterySt.Catchpole · 03-29-2006, 12:23 AM

Okay, so I haven't been here much...

sorry. But I haven't abandoned your story...and how sweet of you to notice I have five fics Ali, and ignore that I have a lot of bad grades because I'm writing them...

I can't believe you didn't show us the dragons Ali, that's so wrong...I love dragons any time you can write them in you should...

I think you should have written out all of Sirius' adventures...you just told them, but I think it would have been more exciting to read them as a flashback *Ottery is obsessed with flashbacks*

*Intro flashback to Ottery writing this post* What should I tell Ali? I was busy fighting a ring tailed lemur? Or a horntailed snagglerock? Or an elephundronebeetle.

*back to the present*

Okay Chapter 10 has me confused? Harry is talking to Wormtail as if he's Voldemort...I would have thought it an accident but you did it throughout the first half of the post...who Harry is he? A doppelganger?

And Animagi for Dummies...

You're too funny Ali, keep up the story mate I'm still reading. I'm just slow sometimes...

03-29-2006, 12:23 AM	#310 (permalink)
OtterySt.Catchpole SS Featured Artist DA Poet Rupert is My Man! SS100 Triumphant Aethonan Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: The Wicked House Posts: 18,910 Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year	I'm still here...Ottery St. supersecretsuperspy Present and accounted for... Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert Okay, so I haven't been here much... sorry. But I haven't abandoned your story...and how sweet of you to notice I have five fics Ali, and ignore that I have a lot of bad grades because I'm writing them... I can't believe you didn't show us the dragons Ali, that's so wrong...I love dragons any time you can write them in you should... I think you should have written out all of Sirius' adventures...you just told them, but I think it would have been more exciting to read them as a flashback Ottery is obsessed with flashbacks Intro flashback to Ottery writing this post What should I tell Ali? I was busy fighting a ring tailed lemur? Or a horntailed snagglerock? Or an elephundronebeetle. back to the present Okay Chapter 10 has me confused? Harry is talking to Wormtail as if he's Voldemort...I would have thought it an accident but you did it throughout the first half of the post...who Harry is he? A doppelganger? And Animagi for Dummies... You're too funny Ali, keep up the story mate I'm still reading. I'm just slow sometimes... __________________