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ronniekins babe · 12-23-2003, 10:24 PM

Hey!!! This is just some poetry I've worked up the courage to post. Don't get me wrong, by all means, Constructive critizizim is...well..constructive!!!

Fairy Tale Dream

You go to bed at the end of a long day,
Letting the darknessand your dreams take you.
You dream of the perfect life, family, friends and all.
Perfect life, perfect dream.

You smile, thinking it's true.
It's diferent than your defective life.
Everything's perfect.
But it's not

It's just your fairy tale dream

Bad, or what? Pleasse R&R!!! I'll have more up soon as soon as I find my notebook!!! Thanx!!! :online2long:

12-23-2003, 10:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
ronniekins babe Horklump Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: North Carolina Posts: 49	Hey!!! This is just some poetry I've worked up the courage to post. Don't get me wrong, by all means, Constructive critizizim is...well..constructive!!! Fairy Tale Dream You go to bed at the end of a long day, Letting the darknessand your dreams take you. You dream of the perfect life, family, friends and all. Perfect life, perfect dream. You smile, thinking it's true. It's diferent than your defective life. Everything's perfect. But it's not It's just your fairy tale dream Bad, or what? Pleasse R&R!!! I'll have more up soon as soon as I find my notebook!!! Thanx!!! :online2long: