Not bad;not bad at all. Quite brillant if you asked me. Keep it up the the more you write the better you will ultimately be. Oh and don't be afriad to show a little anger in poems anyways great job. :flowersmile: :flowersmile: :flowersmile:
P.S. I have poetry called Rally's poetry. So if you could take it out of the kindness of your heart to read it. I will be eternally grateful
Rally