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Old 01-26-2006, 09:30 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Ok I know I said I would convert one of my poems that mean a ton to me. I havent done that yet but here are two poems I wrote awhile ago that can apply to HP without changing and one that I only changed a few lines. And dont worry I have an idea on which poem I'm going to convert *is not telling*

The Price of Victory

There can be no victory without suffering,
Will it be worth the price that must be paid,
Or will we just let the pain overwhelm us,
Will it be worth the lives that were lost,
Where do you draw the line,
How long before the price becomes to much,
There is no victory without a price,
There can be no victory without suffering.


Shutting Down (from Harry's PoV)

My mind is shutting down,
I feel no more,
My soul has been jerked in every single direction,
I'm tired of it,
I'm shutting down my soul so no more pain seeps in,
I cant stand this anymore,
I'm sorry.



Ok I know there short so heres the one I changed a little. From Draco's PoV.

So Alone

Its warm in here,
But I feel so cold,
Look about me what do I see,
I see emptiness,
Nothing here,
Just me,
I am a shadow,
A wandering soul,
I feel nothing but loneliness,
My reason no longer exists,
My tears fall unnoticed,
I am drowning in the icy sea of sadness,
If I left this world,
I doubt many would notice,
And those who did notice,
Wouldn't care,
I am falling into black oblivion,
I have helped take a man from this world,
A man who gave hope to so many,
A man who protected the newcomers from people like me,
I see now I did not own the world,
Since giving my self to evil,
I no longer own my soul,
I was threated by this evil,
I was a coward,
Many would say others are worse off than I,
They are probably right,
But I just feel so alone.


I'll update again soon!
Rachel

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