OHHH what have I done???? I'm a monster *cries* shame on me! I never meant to make you feel like that Angel, i just wanted to be honest *hugs Angel* but I meant that u are really good, we all know that but that you need to work on the hp poetry cause its not common for someone to write about stuff that u dont know, maybe those arent your feelings...you are describin' not creating. That can be hard and so far you have done interesting poetry from the point that u are tryin' to unfold the feelings of a situation created already by J.K in the book. Pretty hard thing to do if you ask me, and so far you've done and outstanding job.
Sometimes is hard for me to express myself correctly due to the language fact, when I try to translate stuff I found myself looking for the correct words and when i cant find them then i frustrate and write the most similar one, I have a complicated lexico in spanish :S. Lol, like in the above there's probably some stuff where i never meant to sound like that
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So, Angel u are great and im waiting for you to get better and better with every new thing you write, cause I know you can, when you fall a little then we need to push for u to keep up. Or so I feel. I love QUIDDITCH by the way, describes what one may feel in the situation, great job!
Oh and Tina, 3 am is indeed freaky lol, and im not a liar