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Originally Posted by allucha
I promised a post, so without any further ado
I don't think you can ever have enough ado Ali. 
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For once, Ron raised his hand and said, “Does it clean wounds?” with a sarcastic tone.
Slughorn was either daft, stupid or both because didn’t seem to hear the sarcasm. Instead he said, “Right you are son, I can tell you have the brains from your brothers.” Ron stared at him trying to work out if this was an insult when Slughorn moved on.
Slughorn isn't daft Ali, he's just really self involved...LOL 
I love him, don't make him stupid okay? :simm: Snape on the other hand you can make as stupid as you like. Oh and I loved the whole thing with Ron, you write him really well, most people don't get him, they always make him stupid or mean, but I think you've got his character pretty good. Quote:
He slowly realised what he was doing and his face went as bright as his hair. “Nothing, I was just thinking, you’d be a great potions master,” he said quickly, covering his face. She looked at him, and turned around, no doubt blushing. She put her potion in beaker and handed it in, avoiding eye contact with the red faced Ron. As the lesson came to an end Ron snapped back into reality when he realised that he hadn’t brewed a potion.
”Oh no, what should I do?” he said trying to gather the spare ingredients.
”Don’t worry Ronald, I could see that you were um, doing something else so I put some of my potion into your beaker.” Hermione said smiling.
That whole part there was too cute, really well written Ali, 
it's nice to see a little love in the air... they're soooooooooooooooooooo cute, they should so have gotten together in book 6 but Noooooooooooooooooooo I have to wait...LOL I think you wrote it rather brilliantly. PAMS.