oh no, what i made is a simple, crap poem, still im posting it here... hope you read it then please tell me, what do you think...

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Knowing there's a wizard's sports excites me
Its quidditch! I really can't wait to see
But of course, I have to learn to fly first
Madam Hooch came, its like quenching my thirst

The first flying lesson was fantastic
I said "up", a command for my broomstick
Can't believe how easy to work it out
Malfoy's been naughty, I had to flew south

I'll get that remembrall back to Neville
'Go stand for what is right'; that's what I feel
I did a somersault just to catch it
Mcgonagall came; maybe its time to quit

Next thing I knew, I am the new seeker
Catch the golden snitch and be a winner
Oh great, thanks to Draco im on the team
Don't matter how dangerous it may seem...
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guyz, what do you think, i admit my poems are just plain, simple and direct to the point with no symbolisms or uncommonly-used words, still i love poems and this is the way I make one... what can you say about these....