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Old 12-06-2005, 09:09 PM   #44 (permalink)
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Okay, Here's a Mucho better reply to your awesomess.
One thing I saw throughout all your writings were little "personal" messages. While many people think it's not necessary, I beg to differ.
Like they say there's always something behind a story. Same goes for poems. It'd be so general if you didn't add your comments and your feelings towards/against the poem you had written.
And always remember, though we're strangers...there are people who care. If only you'd let them.
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I'm more attracted to Wicca than Cathoclism
I'm a devout Catholic/Christian as well so I wouldn't know exactly how you feel. However two of my friends are into Wizza as well. Even if I might disgaree with your point of view in some of those lines, it just shows your uniqueness. Your poems aren't strictly black and white sterotypical. They add a glimpse of color each new line and build on each other. No everyone thinks the same and I recpect your opinion.
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I snuck out of the house and just biked over my friends house and sobbed. And you probably don't even care. Moving on.
Hun, That's normal. Trust me, I've done that million X billion times before. It's what friends are for really. If you ever need to talk though, there are suuport groups on SS and my Pms are always open for the public!
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a Thousand Times
This poem was actually my favorite out of all of yours. It was hard saying that since all of your poems are incredible but I feel so connected with this one. I guess that fight with your rents played out after all. This is a really cool poem witha rythm like no other!
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Pretty Bad. My one friend finds it hilarious. It is, if you think about it....ANyway that's all the time i have on the library comp. I love you all!!
That is a bit uh.....sad. However, I do see the point you were trying to get across. And, I also see how it's funny from your friends point of view.
I also think it's so cute how you steal time on the library comp to post us some of your awesome FF and poems. Others would think it wasn't worth it. Seriously, me too. If I didnt have this much time on my hands, I'd rather be at the library instead of getting cuagt in the middle of my friends' craziness.
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You can all see that I'm not bad at Language Arts (For a 14 year old) but she still gives me bad grades. But do my rents believe me? Nooooooo. Anyway, I'm done ranting.
Lmao, you're so funny. There will always be a teacher that you just don't get along with or vice versa. I've had my share of annoying teachers...In fact, I'v e always had mean teachers. My bad luck I guess. They like to describe me as the "mentally challenged"...I guess acting like a smart **** doesn't help but still. They still should give us the grades we deserve right? Whatever, I guess life's not fair eh?
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Er, yeah Depression
Wow....I'm speechless....My friend is going through the same thing. I always saw "cutting" as well er...Stupid to be honest. I don't see how hurting yourself would make you feel better. I've read alot and my friend tries so much to get me to understand but...I don't see the point in it. Your poem helps to understand it but it leaves us at a point where we don't know what will happen. I hope you don't go through with this....If you do, or did or whatever say it please. It's bad enough you have a hard time with your rents we don't want anything else causing you not to come back to SS and give us those updates that we love so very much!
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My first love poem. There's only like 3 of those. Kind of bad, too. But hey, I tried.
That's cute. And it's so not bad, I guess it was pretty obvious that you werent feeling it. WIth the other poems, it's like the writer and reader are connected to understand the author is trying to get across. With that one, while it was good, you didn't really "feel" what you were saying merely just saying them in writing. I still liked it. But, if you keep at it, eventually you'll get it straight.
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one response *sigh*
Lol. You know your works great, so whether you have all of SS reading or just me and lilypad your self esteem should be the same. Sometimes readers don't check up on the poems threads as often as they come on SS, but remember that they evntually will all come back begging for more of your awesomeness!
Well, I'm at the end of your poems now
:worship: I shall worship and hail all of your work everytime I get a chance!
I love them all, You're an awesome writer and I'll always be around to praise you! PAMS when you can!
Your devoted reader,
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