Take Me Away


Take me away from this hole
I don’t want to be here anymore
I feel as if I have no control.
Why does it feel like I’ve been here before?


Take me away from this life.
It’s getting to be too much
Why must it always be full of strife?
I’ve lost the sense of touch.


Take me away from the madness.
The screaming the shouting; how can a person think?
I’m being consumed by sadness.
I could be gone within an eye blink.


Take me away; but do I want to be gone forever?
I don’t think I can handle this pain much longer.
I’m sure you feel oh so clever.
I’m growing used to the nuisance of this dagger.

Well this was the poem I've been working on. It still seems to be missing something but it is much better. It's a difficult subject that I'm still not sure about. That's the main reason why I still don't think it's done. I'm not sure what I'm trying to say with this poem. (actually I am, just don't take it seriously anyone. I do not in anyway want to be taken away.)

Actually lety *beams* I have just started letting my poetry out this year. I'm even starting to debate if I'm going to look into a book or not. It all just depends. I probably won't publish them, but it's just a nice day dream sort of thing. I like picking and choose what piece of me that I want to show them. Then see the look of "wow" on their face. I've only showed the mild ones though. They really liked Life. Just wait until I finally show them everything else...

Then realization will kick in. It'll be the long awaited revenge type of feeling. One that I may end up regretting.
- Angel