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Old 11-17-2003, 05:28 PM   #27 (permalink)
PotterPoet82499
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Originally posted by Alyonna@Sep 8 2003, 02:10 PM
all right here it is: the D/G poem (third person, but Ginny POV - does that make sense?). hope you like it!

Living in a world
Living on the edge
She took one step too far
One risk too much

Before she knew what happened
Her world fell apart
Her love abandoned her
Her heart was an empty shell

Every time he walked by
She couldn't help but stare
His eyes were blue as ever
Full of happiness and grace

How could he go on like that?
She'd think to herself
It's like he's forgotten
What we had together

She'd watch him from a distance
While he flirted with every girl he saw
And every time she saw him
Her heart wept inside

After awhile she gave up
She stopped trying to live
She couldn't hold on anymore
Hope left her stranded

Every time he looked into her eyes
She hoped he'd see the hurt
But he never noticed
And her days got worse

No one was there to help her
No one cared for a wounded woman
They told her to stop sulking
And be herself again

When living became too unbearable
She changed her appearance
Her freckled face became pale
And her sunset red hair came to match her mood

She walked around the halls
Like a shadow dressed in black
No one noticed her anymore
She needed a way to escape

And so it began
Every night, she'd sit in bed
Crying, weeping for him
Until she could cry no more

That's when she'd take the knife
Out from under the pillow
And carve his name
Onto her legs - over and over

She'd watch the blood
Trickle down her legs
And stain the already
Blood-red sheets

And then she'd tuck into bed
Crying, weeping for him
And every night, she whispered his name
Into the darkness, hoping he'd hear...

"Draco, Draco, Draco..."
YAY Alonya! I love every single piece of writing you put out into this void we call a world. You should come checkout my poetry, I've got some stuff you'd like I think. Keep writing!

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