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“Gryffindor!” the hat proclaimed to one an all.
Tee hee I'm psychic!
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“Hi, I’m Colin Creevey and this is my brother Dennis,” the first boy gestured to the second who smiled and nodded enthusiastically. “We were wondering if we could get pictures,” Colin held up and enormous camera, “and an interview on what it’s like for you to come to Hogwarts?”
This just seems to fit so perfectly here.

And I love how you write Lavender and Parvati too! It seem so....canonized. lol
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Harry smiled at this and turned to look at the person who’d addressed him. “That’s true,” he answered. He looked at Sirius, suddenly bemused. “Not to be rude, but do I know you from somewhere?”
Bemused....

It's a funny word.

Ok I'm done now. Interesting. You're going to leave us hanging again.
Sorry about the shortness of this review! I will be back with a better one!