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Old 08-08-2005, 07:38 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Wink The Love That Is No Longer There - Sa13+

hello everyone, this is my first fanfic and i'm really anticipacious.this is a short story and no names for the characters. if u hav any problem i would be happy to help. hope u like it!!!



Rain splattered on the windows and ran off, like the tears which often ran down her once rosy cheeks. She stood by the window, looking out at the verdant garden with bunches of fragrant and vividly coloured flowers. Her vision misted as she remembered that unforgettable day again. It had been on a day like this that she met him, with murky clouds, which were threatening to rain any moment. She was out for her daily walk in the park at dawn. While walking, she had turned her head to watch a dove fly through the forget-me-not blue sky and had surreptiously collided with him. His hazel eyes met her grey ones. A tickling sensation went through her. They stood there transfixed for a moment. Then jolted abruptly to reality, she hastily went her way. She saw him everyday after that incidental one, though being vulnerable never did anything. Sometimes she could feel his entrancing eyes on her, or a flicker of a smile on his enthralling face.

to be continued...
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