Originally Posted by hl2 addict

I could have lost some brain cells
Reading that was like putting broken shells
Into my brain
Please...please stop the pain

Don't take this seriously or personally it was meant to be humorous I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings. Your poetry is good but its the typical "teenage angst" or depresion or hatred and feeling that everyone is against you and your the only one suffering... I also don't take poems seriously when they are full of "u" or "r" or spelling mistakes.