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Originally Posted by FireboltFreak
These are great, I really like the first one, keep writing.
thanx. hope u come bak 2 read more.
all my time i've been trying to hold on to u
i let your lies blind me
just because i was i love with u
and i thought u loved me too
now that i look back at all the mistakes i've made
i look at all the obvious sign
and i see that u've been trying 2 tell me
and i blame myself 4 not seeing them
i guess it's not your fault
4 all the pain i've gone through
and i'm not gonna finish that poem because i don't have a good enough ending. now that i look bak at the poem, i think it's kinda odd.....