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lexy91112 · 06-01-2005, 03:07 PM

Wow, really thanks--that means alot to me!

And just for that, i shall post another! This is probably one of my favorites...I remember one time i was crying, and for some reason it just hit me to write it down. Since then, i've used a vaguely similar use of the words in my FF and of course, it finally turned into this poem; for which i am grateful. So you writer's out there--write everything down, you never know what it can become!

Life, Love and Teardrops

two tricklings escape the reservoir
in my eyes

they travel down
my frost-nipped cheeks

one
takes a wrong turn
and falls
off my nose

the other
travels safely
to my chin
where it is wiped
away

(argh, the away is supposed to be furth over--as if it was actually being wiped away--but SS won't let me >.<)

06-01-2005, 03:07 PM	#13 (permalink)
lexy91112 Puffskein Join Date: May 2004 Location: Mississippi. Posts: 1,280	Wow, really thanks--that means alot to me! And just for that, i shall post another! This is probably one of my favorites...I remember one time i was crying, and for some reason it just hit me to write it down. Since then, i've used a vaguely similar use of the words in my FF and of course, it finally turned into this poem; for which i am grateful. So you writer's out there--write everything down, you never know what it can become! Life, Love and Teardrops two tricklings escape the reservoir in my eyes they travel down my frost-nipped cheeks one takes a wrong turn and falls off my nose the other travels safely to my chin where it is wiped away (argh, the away is supposed to be furth over--as if it was actually being wiped away--but SS won't let me >.<) Last edited by lexy91112; 06-01-2005 at 03:34 PM.