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OtterySt.Catchpole · 04-13-2005, 04:49 AM

Hey Aria...it's Ottery...

...so I was down here and I was like. "I don't read enough poetry." Probably because I hate it so much...it sounds nice, don't get me wrong, just ask me to give you the meaning or do an analysis of a short poem, and I'd just rather write a paper on a novel thanks much.

So Here's what I loved...dissected for your cringing pleasure...

Quote:

Originally Posted by hpoenixrose13star

Hush

Great title, my favorite episode of Buffy is titled Hush too...

Quote:

I dare not share my heart. I've done it once before and it ripped me apart, but the trouble is that I did it again and I do it now, I just wish I were dead, but I cannot stop and this love for you is making me rot.

While I can honestly say love has never made me rot...I can say I've been there for the rest...

so, besides it sounded nice, and it got my attention.

Quote:

My heart still is ripping, ripping in the silence of my darkest hour, whilst in a love affair that has me devoured.

Quote:

We will protect you on this dark night. Hush, Hush little girl. We wont let you get hurt. But this was a lie that I should have seen from the start.

Nice imagery...the ripping heart, and I love how it sounds 'in the silence of my darkest hour' I'm all jealous...and 'we will protect you on this dark night'...who? Who? You know it can't be anyone good. I liked that.

Quote:

How can you help me? How can you care? When the one I love most wouldn't even dare.

Aint it the truth...

Quote:

I've tried to hush. I've tried to sleep, but this love has done such awful things to me. Its made me feel, but these feelings must be kept in and I wonder why I even bother to live. ...you have no reason to weep in the night.

I liked that...'this love has done such awful things to me.' and 'you have no reason to weep in the night' but I do...sorry I mean...it sounded really good, nice work.

Quote:

I love someone who would rather me be dead.

Ottery's advice is ditch that zero and get yourself with a hero...word.

04-13-2005, 04:49 AM	#11 (permalink)
OtterySt.Catchpole SS Featured Artist DA Poet Rupert is My Man! SS100 Triumphant Aethonan Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: The Wicked House Posts: 18,909 Hogwarts RPG Name: Ottery St. Catchpole Gryffindor Third Year	Ottery taking a scalpel to good poetry since he'd been read Mother Goose Paris & Kellybear r luv :Read Otty 's fics:Gone With the Wind:I♥Rupert Hey Aria...it's Ottery... ...so I was down here and I was like. "I don't read enough poetry." Probably because I hate it so much...it sounds nice, don't get me wrong, just ask me to give you the meaning or do an analysis of a short poem, and I'd just rather write a paper on a novel thanks much. So Here's what I loved...dissected for your cringing pleasure... Quote: Originally Posted by hpoenixrose13star Hush Great title, my favorite episode of Buffy is titled Hush too... Quote: I dare not share my heart. I've done it once before and it ripped me apart, but the trouble is that I did it again and I do it now, I just wish I were dead, but I cannot stop and this love for you is making me rot. While I can honestly say love has never made me rot...I can say I've been there for the rest... so, besides it sounded nice, and it got my attention. Quote: My heart still is ripping, ripping in the silence of my darkest hour, whilst in a love affair that has me devoured. Quote: We will protect you on this dark night. Hush, Hush little girl. We wont let you get hurt. But this was a lie that I should have seen from the start. Nice imagery...the ripping heart, and I love how it sounds 'in the silence of my darkest hour' I'm all jealous...and 'we will protect you on this dark night'...who? Who? You know it can't be anyone good. I liked that. Quote: How can you help me? How can you care? When the one I love most wouldn't even dare. Aint it the truth... Quote: I've tried to hush. I've tried to sleep, but this love has done such awful things to me. Its made me feel, but these feelings must be kept in and I wonder why I even bother to live. ...you have no reason to weep in the night. I liked that...'this love has done such awful things to me.' and 'you have no reason to weep in the night' but I do...sorry I mean...it sounded really good, nice work. Quote: I love someone who would rather me be dead. Ottery's advice is ditch that zero and get yourself with a hero...word. __________________