Ah thankies. Woohoo a reply, now I don't need to spam all over my own thread!lol

Senses - Part 1

An empty park in a suburban street
no noise, not a sound.
A swing on it's rusty hinges is blown by the wind,
some litter rolls along the ground.
Yet the park remains still in this afternoon,
The autumn sun a blazing.
A girl alone sits on a bench
and it seems she is intently gazing.

The beautiful sun shines gentley down
and glows on her soft face.
She gazes back into the sky
and decides she likes this place.
The sky's warm colours blosom
and she likes that it is near.
But little does her friend the sun
know that this child cannot hear.

I think I will make that like a series, that doesn't seem enough.