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Old 04-05-2005, 02:06 AM   #16 (permalink)
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To tell you guys the truth I don't really like this poem I wrote I feel like I could make it better but I just don't know how. But here it is:

"Tears"

People around me so sad and gloomy. For the tragedy that came and left. For the tears they cried and the prayers they said. The worry and pain they felt. I wish I could make everything better but I can't, I wish that I could wak away and come back when everything is better. But I think I dont have to walk away, because the tears and prayers have now payed off and everything is back to mormal, I guess...............?

There ya go tell me what you think I dont care if there's criticism

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