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Old 10-03-2003, 11:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it, I like it. The rhyming scheme is pleasing. The first stanza is nice, the whole content is clear. :up:
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If all the world were made of paper,
And all the sea of ink,
And all the trees were bread and cheese,
What would we have to drink?
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