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~HPLover · 03-15-2005, 10:10 PM

Here's another poem. Please tell me how I could improve. Thanks.

Butterfly Wings
I’m just a girl

whose heart takes flight on butterfly wings.

My heart longs to see the world,

and to some day make a vow with rings.

My dreams have to be achieved,

and in myself I have to believe.

I won’t be negatively perceived,

and then my desires will be received.

I will be happy as can be,

and my heart will then joyfully sing.

I’m just a girl

whose heart takes flight on butterfly wings.

03-15-2005, 10:10 PM	#2 (permalink)
~HPLover Bundimun Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 25	More Poetry Here's another poem. Please tell me how I could improve. Thanks. Butterfly Wings I’m just a girl whose heart takes flight on butterfly wings. My heart longs to see the world, and to some day make a vow with rings. My dreams have to be achieved, and in myself I have to believe. I won’t be negatively perceived, and then my desires will be received. I will be happy as can be, and my heart will then joyfully sing. I’m just a girl whose heart takes flight on butterfly wings. __________________ "Imagination is more important than knowledge." Last edited by ~HPLover; 03-16-2005 at 10:07 PM.