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Sk8er girl · 03-13-2005, 12:09 AM

Heres another one of my poems my friend read it and she liked it so hope someone like it on here

"Drowning"
As I hold on to you...you slip away with my heart and my soul. I'm trying to hold on to the little pieces of what we had when we were together. But I'm so scared that I'm drowning with all your lies and your broken promises that I dont know what to do. I'm so lost and lonely that you dont even care that I'm drowning in what we used to have. What I thought was love but really it was lies and broken promises, you made me feel so stupid and foolish. I loved you but I guess that love is gone....... So I stay here drowning until I find what we once had.

03-13-2005, 12:09 AM	#2 (permalink)
Sk8er girl Firecrab Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 715	Heres another one of my poems my friend read it and she liked it so hope someone like it on here "Drowning" As I hold on to you...you slip away with my heart and my soul. I'm trying to hold on to the little pieces of what we had when we were together. But I'm so scared that I'm drowning with all your lies and your broken promises that I dont know what to do. I'm so lost and lonely that you dont even care that I'm drowning in what we used to have. What I thought was love but really it was lies and broken promises, you made me feel so stupid and foolish. I loved you but I guess that love is gone....... So I stay here drowning until I find what we once had.