oh, i'm glad people like it! makes me feel better about my poems! Here's another one, tell me if it's alright.

Time to Tell

I haven't told you often,
I haven't told you tons,
But this seemed like a good time
To say thanks for all you've done.
I love you very deeply,
And with all of my heart,
Yet I know that I don't always
Show this hidden part. So
I will tell you here, and I
Will tell you now, while
I still have a chance,
Before my time runs out.
I love you, and thanks
For all you've done. I'm
Sorry I couldn't tell you
Sooner.