I'm not a good poetry writer, but just to get opinions on my attempts, I'm posting some of them here. So...yeah. Tell me if you like them, please.

Memory
I once was here,
But now I'm gone,
To a better place,
Far beyond the
Children's cries,
High above the
Smoggy skies.
I remember that
It wasn't all bad...
Remember the fun
That we would have?
And as the sun comes
At dawn, I'd like you
To know that I love you,
Even though I couldn't
Tell you until now-
WHen I'm gone.

I know it's stupid, but tell me what you think of it.