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Alyonna · 09-13-2003, 06:50 PM

that's interesting - i really like your rhyming, and its a great story, its just missing something - you know it's a little short, so definitely work on it, but keep up the rhyming!

09-13-2003, 06:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
Alyonna Imp Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: At your neck! Posts: 489	that's interesting - i really like your rhyming, and its a great story, its just missing something - you know it's a little short, so definitely work on it, but keep up the rhyming! __________________ What shall I call thee when thou art a man?