Thread: Poetry: awalkingshadow's Poetry
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Old 09-13-2003, 02:14 AM   #13 (permalink)
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hm...The Blood of Roses seems like a parting and sin, like the blacking rose.
This is a bit too literal, but the whole thing made me think of the biblical story of Noah and the Ark... :ermsmile:
When reading it aloud, the stanzas with 5 lines sound a bit akward.
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If all the world were made of paper,
And all the sea of ink,
And all the trees were bread and cheese,
What would we have to drink?
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