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Connie 
HI think I'm going to call it a short story and divide it into maybe three parts. I do hope you like this poem from the first part, it was fun to write. I'm not good at writing poetry, so please accuse my inept attempt.
Connie
How so "you are not good at writing poetry"? Don't say nonsense! You are great in doing that and I love every part you wrote here.
I think it's perfect from you writing in verses a poem for Christmas. Writing with words arranged in a perfect rhythmic pattern sounds like children songs, reminds me of fairy tales. It takes me to my past, when I waited for Santa Claus to bring a special Christmas gift. Brilliant! I loved it and I want more! <3
You are great in describing all the scenes, I can see the students running to see the car and I even can hear their excited voices of surprise when they opened their gifts.
It's everything perfect. I love it! Thank you for sharing your magic with us!
