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Lissy Longbottom · 10-03-2014, 12:11 AM

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Originally Posted by natethegreat

This was good! The creepy old man was more focused on Aladdin speaking, and not him rummaging through his pockets! Finely finding a few things he quickly pulled out the items, while listening to the payment he offered. Replying to him in a rather creeped out voice "My first born child? Erm...sure? But! On one condition. The Genie does NOT count as this child." Just to make sure that this man wouldn't try to find any loopholes and snatch his Genie away from him. It was rather odd how HE, probably the creepiest, least trustful man in this room, was the first one to offer Aladdin any help.

Also something seemed rather off about him that Aladdin didn't like "Also! Another quick deal that must be dealt with is, this deal will only happen if you complete your end of the bargain, AND if we are successful in finding the lamp. Ok?" Aladdin was still trying to make sure there was no loose edges to this deal that could be potentially cut off. Aladdin didn't want to have to lose his first born child if he couldn't find Genie. That would be distressful because how would he explain it to his wife when that happened? 'Oh yeah, I forgot to mention, our first born child is going to this creepy old man for who knows what because I had to find my Genie Lamp.' That wouldn't make that situation any better whatsoever.

Making sure that the man was distracted, Aladdin looked down at his palm to see what he snatched off this guy. In his hand there was two coins, and some pocket lint from the looks of it. The pocket lint was obviously worth nothing...but the coins on the other hand. Those seemed rather valuable. Both of the coins were gold. These type of coins didn't seem like normal currency to Aladdin. Definitely not any type of coin he has ever seen before.

"Of course not! The genie is the genie," Rumple agreed with a nod. He wasn't stupid - he wasn't going to try and use THAT as a loophole. Rumple had other loopholes he could use in his agreement should it come to it.

"And I agree - we BOTH must get what we want in order for the deal to be done," he told him with a grin. With that, he walked over and started to write out a contract with the quill and parchment some Snake Person had left lying around on a nearby table. "I'll draw up the contract now and you can sign if you feel it's...satisfactory," he told him. The boy wouldn't find any loopholes - at least, none that the BOY could find. Rumple would find them, because he ALWAYS did.

Rumple liked this kid. He was smart - not as smart as Rumple, because no one was - but smart. He really hoped he wouldn't try and back out of the deal - he didn't want to have to destroy him.

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Lissy Longbottom Potterdom Mod Book Club Mod Giant Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Ferrix: GMT-6 Posts: 56,908 Hogwarts RPG Name: Moritz Schultz (#0f667e) Ravenclaw Seventh Year Hogwarts RPG Name: Nancy Schultz (#ac6f77) Hufflepuff Fourth Year x11 x1	curly haired prefect - "sometimes I get angry!" - 30/90 - chicken emoji - probably @ Disney - I speak dog Quote: Originally Posted by natethegreat This was good! The creepy old man was more focused on Aladdin speaking, and not him rummaging through his pockets! Finely finding a few things he quickly pulled out the items, while listening to the payment he offered. Replying to him in a rather creeped out voice *"My first born child? Erm...sure? But! On one condition. The Genie does NOT* count as this child." Just to make sure that this man wouldn't try to find any loopholes and snatch his Genie away from him. It was rather odd how HE, probably the creepiest, least trustful man in this room, was the first one to offer Aladdin any help. Also something seemed rather off about him that Aladdin didn't like "Also! Another quick deal that must be dealt with is, this deal will only happen if you complete your end of the bargain, AND if we are successful in finding the lamp. Ok?"** Aladdin was still trying to make sure there was no loose edges to this deal that could be potentially cut off. Aladdin didn't want to have to lose his first born child if he couldn't find Genie. That would be distressful because how would he explain it to his wife when that happened? 'Oh yeah, I forgot to mention, our first born child is going to this creepy old man for who knows what because I had to find my Genie Lamp.' That wouldn't make that situation any better whatsoever. Making sure that the man was distracted, Aladdin looked down at his palm to see what he snatched off this guy. In his hand there was two coins, and some pocket lint from the looks of it. The pocket lint was obviously worth nothing...but the coins on the other hand. Those seemed rather valuable. Both of the coins were gold. These type of coins didn't seem like normal currency to Aladdin. Definitely not any type of coin he has ever seen before. "Of course not! The genie is the genie," Rumple agreed with a nod. He wasn't stupid - he wasn't going to try and use THAT as a loophole. Rumple had other loopholes he could use in his agreement should it come to it. "And I agree - we BOTH must get what we want in order for the deal to be done," he told him with a grin. With that, he walked over and started to write out a contract with the quill and parchment some Snake Person had left lying around on a nearby table. "I'll draw up the contract now and you can sign if you feel it's...satisfactory," he told him. The boy wouldn't find any loopholes - at least, none that the BOY could find. Rumple would find them, because he ALWAYS did. Rumple liked this kid. He was smart - not as smart as Rumple, because no one was - but smart. He really hoped he wouldn't try and back out of the deal - he didn't want to have to destroy him. __________________ I'm still standin'________________________________________ better than I ever did Lookin' like a true survivor_________________________________feelin' like a little kid