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DaniDiNardo · 05-23-2013, 03:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Saul Bunyons

Here, a lil' girl was tryna' take Saul's money already. Poor thing. He felt bad fer th' lass, considerin' this was her weeken' too and she oughter be able ter enjoy it, but nope, she was out here sellin' eggs. Fer a class, it looked like.

Lousy fundraiser if yeh asked him. But th' only thing anybody was asking Saul was whether or not he wanted their ashwinder eggs. Hmmhmm.

"I only need th' one jar," he mumbled. Saul held his wallet firmly in one hand and picked up one of the girl's jars with th' other. "Hmm." Ten galleons fer this!

But maybe he didn't need to spend ten whole galleons. "Seven galleons fer two," Saul repeated, setting the first girl's jar down with a thud. "Well I'll be, lil ladeh, is that a square deal?"

He spat in his empty hand and held it out fer her t' shake.

"Sorreh, son," Saul used his wallet-holdin' hand ter tip his hat toward the lil' boy, "but I think I've got me a bargain here, wit this 'un." He nodded toward Beezus.

Twitch.

Why did everyone want to buy a whole jar. It worked out crudily for her when they decided to be smart about it. Really, with her, it cost less to buy the entire thing but really, she never thought many people would want the WHOLE jar.

Here this man was proving her wrong--

STOP!!!

STOP STOP STOP

Was it just her or was Bee like TOTALLY RUINING her sale??? Um. NO. "Excuse me Sir." Because this was just a NO. It was no longer about the galleons she earned but the principle behind it. Namely, she saw him FIRST. Besides, she unfortunately had a more reasonable price. "But that's not really a deal she's offering." Nope nope nope. "She'll give you two for 7 galleons but I'm required to sell the jar for 5. Think about it Mister, you'd get 5 of 'em for 2 galleons less than what you would have paid for only two."

For once she didn't mind abiding by these sales rules. Not if it got HER the customer. "So what'd you say? You want 'em?"

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DaniDiNardo Crup Join Date: May 2012 Location: Over here! (GMT -5) Posts: 17,239 Hogwarts RPG Name: Ruth (Rae) Elliot Gryffindor First Year x12 x12	Yeah I broke that mirror, so what? ll NOT backward ll Official Gryfferin ll Lemon's favourite Quote: Originally Posted by Saul Bunyons Here, a lil' girl was tryna' take Saul's money already. Poor thing. He felt bad fer th' lass, considerin' this was her weeken' too and she oughter be able ter enjoy it, but nope, she was out here sellin' eggs. Fer a class, it looked like. Lousy fundraiser if yeh asked him. But th' only thing anybody was asking Saul was whether or not he wanted their ashwinder eggs. Hmmhmm. "I only need th' one jar," he mumbled. Saul held his wallet firmly in one hand and picked up one of the girl's jars with th' other. "Hmm." Ten galleons fer this! But maybe he didn't need to spend ten whole galleons. "Seven galleons fer two," Saul repeated, setting the first girl's jar down with a thud. "Well I'll be, lil ladeh, is that a square deal?" He spat in his empty hand and held it out fer her t' shake. "Sorreh, son," Saul used his wallet-holdin' hand ter tip his hat toward the lil' boy, "but I think I've got me a bargain here, wit this 'un." He nodded toward Beezus. Twitch. Why did everyone want to buy a whole jar. It worked out crudily for her when they decided to be smart about it. Really, with her, it cost less to buy the entire thing but really, she never thought many people would want the WHOLE jar. Here this man was proving her wrong-- STOP!!! STOP STOP STOP Was it just her or was Bee like TOTALLY RUINING her sale??? Um. NO. "Excuse me Sir." Because this was just a NO. It was no longer about the galleons she earned but the principle behind it. Namely, she saw him FIRST. Besides, she unfortunately had a more reasonable price. "But that's not really a deal she's offering." Nope nope nope. "She'll give you two for 7 galleons but I'm required to sell the jar for 5. Think about it Mister, you'd get 5 of 'em for 2 galleons less than what you would have paid for only two." For once she didn't mind abiding by these sales rules. Not if it got HER the customer. "So what'd you say? You want 'em?" __________________ Imma say all the words inside my head____________________________________ ______________________________I'm fired up and tired of the way that things are said.