post #2 What was she doing wrong? She knew what was supposed to happen, and yet, there was no Ashwinder in her fire. She had waited two minutes forever for this creature to come out, and yet, it stayed hidden. It was like Bigfoot in that way.
Was Tanner allowed to try and help the fire? Wait, that would be tending it. Never mind. No matter how impatient she was, she was not going to start all over on this. She was determined to get this done, and she was going to do it in one shot. That was her goal at least.
And then, Tanner's jaw dropped. This creature was not something to be messed with. At least it didn't look that way. Red eyes looked ahead as it rose out of the fire. Tanner's jaw dropped again. Oww, she was going to need jaw surgery by her second year of Hogwarts.
In fact, she was so busy looking at the creature, that she almost forgot to chase it. However, she did snap out of her thoughts in time and hurriedly grabbed jars and gloves and ran after the retreating Ashwinder.
Last edited by thestoryneverends; 05-18-2013 at 08:09 PM.
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