Oh my gosh Abi!!
Crazy... but I loved it!

Wonderful job.
I love how she's yelling at Harry (I would be too) and how much everyone cares for her. Ron's joking is perfect in that, even though he's lost (so he thinks) his best friend , he's still make small comments.
Loved! Can't wait for more!
-Rach
P.S.-- Glad you're back