09-16-2012, 12:14 PM
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 SS 100 Triumphant
DIMCPuffskein
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Over the Rainbow.
Posts: 1,825
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Harvey Jarvis
Second Year |  Horses Forever! l l Writer for Life l Yearbook alumnus
Hellooo new reader here. This is excellent, you must update soon once again! Brilliant characterization and plot and dialogue and atmosphere - love how we get an insight into events we already know but from a different POV. You pace out action perfectly too. But ho's this girl? More please! 
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