09-15-2012, 06:54 PM
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 SS 100 Triumphant
DIMCPuffskein
Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Over the Rainbow.
Posts: 1,825
Hogwarts RPG Name:
Harvey Jarvis
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...and? What next? This is excellently written - dialogue, characterization, action, descriptions, you've got it all down to a "t". Incredibly engaging - which means you need to post more, and soon 
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