SPOILER!!: My wonderful readers
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narnia_potter I really liked it!
I loved the last line about sleep
Glad you're back!
Can't wait for more!
-Rachel
Thank You ever so much Rachel! haha yeah I'm forever going to love that line
thanks it's good to be back.
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Connie Hey Eviee an intense ride that's for sure. My favorite part;
And this is my favorite line, so brilliant Snape's grumbling;
Loved it so much.
Eviee, I want to let you know that I really do enjoy your ff. I'm kind of confused about what you mean here. Don't you enjoy writing this anymore, or you feel like it's becoming a burden to keep it going??? I think you're doing great with the writing. I'll be watching for your next.
Corrine, thank you ever so much for sticking to the story even though i've been a terrible author :/ I'm glad you really liked this chapter I wasn't too sure on it actually.
I'm glad you enjoy reading this FF, hate that I went four months without writing any more :/ I do love writing this story, I meant that I was given a week to update or this was deleted so I rushly wrote the chapter above and wasn't sure on it at all :/ but i'm glad people like it
Here's the next chapter for you, got into the writing mood
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Droo YAY NEW CHAPPIE!!!! I'm excited!
hahaha, glad your excited!
here's the next chapter!
Dedicated to my three close friends; Laila, Maura and Stef
Created; Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop
Chapter Fourteen
The little girl stopped in her tracks and looked up. Clouds suddenly covered the once clear sky and plunged the earth below into more darkness. The girl was looking for something, something that continues to hide from her much to her annoyance. Her bag hung on one shoulder and swung around a little as she spun around in a circle looking up. Then the sky cleared and could see it all. A war, a battle. Everyone was moving to fast for her to make out good from bad, nor could she see who was who from her vantage point. Her bag fell from her shoulders as she watched but she ignored it in favor of the battle above her. Her heart quickened in pace without her really knowing, light flooded the skies in red, green, pink, purple to name a few. To most it looked like a firework display but to her it was the light between life and death. She didn't leabe from her spot, how could she? she stood hoping they would get out there in one piece, she wished it.
The were all moving in different directions and she was finding it difficult to keep up with them, they were moving far too fast for her. Flying too far away from her eyes to see, she couldn't lose them, she just couldn't. She needed to to see how this played out, for some of them anyway but who did she follow!? They weren't actually making this easy for her. Grabbing her bag from the grassy ground she ran in the direction of one group. She had no clue as to why she followed this particular group but it drew her in with it's over pwering goodness. Nor did she have a clue how long she followed them, over hills and fields but her energy was endless and time felt like nothing to her. Her hair bounced as she ran and her bag continuously bumped against her leg but she ignored that, instead continued to look upwards whenever she could.
She watched the entire thing. The fight, two on two yet it was unfair. The flashes of lights from each others wands continued to flash about causing barely any injuries until the spell caused an ear to fall off. Call it falling off, it was more blown off. The young girl gasped and stopped in her tracks, she could not bring herself to follow them further. To watch the person come to their certain death for every wound in a battle was a fatal one. She watched the wizard almost fall off his broom and she closed her eyes tight, keeping the tears at bay. When she could force them open she looked up once more and watched them fly away, leaving her behind. This mission of hers was going to be more difficult that she thought. From this moment on.