SO I've finally found some time to comment.
Because I've been planning to for AGES!
1) Linds... you made me cry! It's so so so sad, and sweet, but sad!
2) I love Daichi more than ever now, cause he is super cute. You write him really well, and I love Mr Duckles too.
3) .. Just emotion and intensity... seriously, rollercoaster!
Also... methinks you should write more Daichi stuff, because you can't show us this and then not write more. That'd be mean!
--Emz