Hey Heather, it's been awhile. I'm glad El landed in a safe place, although Ollie might be a problem. I don't know him well enough to determine exactly what my feelings are for him yet.
There are two questions I have been wondering about. How is it that Sirius let her run when he said he could keep her there no matter what she tried? And I thought she left Grimwald place early in the morning around 4 I think you said, and then she walked for 2 hours before getting to the Leaky Cauldron and from there it was just a short walk around the corner a bit and she was at the shelter for children. So I thought it was about 6 AM, yet all the children were in the reck room. I guess it doesn't matter, it's just a little distracting.
Lastly I think it's kind of strange the way the whole post was just very short sentences and mostly all dialogue. At first I didn't know if I liked it, but I think it made me see how fast Ella's world is turning now, and she really seems to keep track of herself better this way while she is running and finding the direction she needs to go in. It's just a little confusing to follow sometimes.
I love Snape and Ella's relationship getting warmer. I enjoy reading them.
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Oh and when I finish Year 5, I will immediately go to year 7 and epilogue. It also won’t be as long, because it will be a different format.
WOW ok, I look forward to your next post.
