I know how much you enjoy writing and I want you to know that I also enjoy reading what you write.
As I promised, I'm here reading this story, in English. This last chapter left me sad in the same way when I read in HP the Merope's story ('ve talked about this). ANd after that... Poor Flora! Refresh her ​​life, she'd like some colorful butterflies and a rainbow day! (it would be that you would like, i know... and if Flora is like you, she would like it too, she need it too)...
well, that's enough.
kisses

gabriel