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sweetpinkpixie · 03-21-2012, 03:31 AM

Hello and welcome! Please be sure to edit your first post with a chapter index when you next update and, as always, update often and have fun!

Just a few comments to kick things off and to maybe keep in mind for future posts

Keep an eye on punctuation and spelling. For example, there are a few proper nouns and words after periods that are not capitalized. These little mistakes can be a distraction to the reader.
Yay for Draco's point of view! I always enjoy reading things from character's perspective and will be interested to see what you do with this. I'd like to see his reason for using muggleborn in his diary instead of mudblood - which we all know he always uses to refer to Hermione.

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