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sweetpinkpixie · 03-16-2012, 03:41 PM

Thank you for sharing your talent with us! I am looking forward to seeing where this goes and just what "end" the snake spoke of may be foreshadowing!

Just one quick comment - and I promise a more detailed critique and praise later - but I think the word you were looking for is Prologue and not Prelogue

03-16-2012, 03:41 PM	#2 (permalink)
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