Originally Posted by Lady Mouldywart

Yep, that's what I thought too...I've never heard of any captain who was very patient or nice

I love knowing what you guys think, so please by all means, point out the mistakes. I know my writing is far from perfect, so it will help me become a better writer if you give your opinions on grammar/style etc.

Thanks as always *glomps the whole lot of you*

Btw Chapter 12 = about 1/3 ready