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Lady Mouldywart · 02-07-2012, 09:11 PM

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Originally Posted by LillyJames

Yeah, I admit I did start it. Hahaha

And about the whole captain of the team, not unoriginal, and he's not just like Oliver Wood, he just happens to be who I connected him with. I suppose most captains of sports are like that anyway.

Yep, that's what I thought too...I've never heard of any captain who was very patient or nice

I love knowing what you guys think, so please by all means, point out the mistakes. I know my writing is far from perfect, so it will help me become a better writer if you give your opinions on grammar/style etc.

Thanks as always *glomps the whole lot of you*

Btw Chapter 12 = about 1/3 ready

02-07-2012, 09:11 PM	#164 (permalink)
Lady Mouldywart Gnome Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 276 First Year	Quote: Originally Posted by LillyJames Yeah, I admit I did start it. Hahaha And about the whole captain of the team, not unoriginal, and he's not just like Oliver Wood, he just happens to be who I connected him with. I suppose most captains of sports are like that anyway. Yep, that's what I thought too...I've never heard of any captain who was very patient or nice I love knowing what you guys think, so please by all means, point out the mistakes. I know my writing is far from perfect, so it will help me become a better writer if you give your opinions on grammar/style etc. Thanks as always glomps the whole lot of you Btw Chapter 12 = about 1/3 ready