Great chapter!
"“Oh for pity’s sake, I’ll read it Bandy,” said Jen, after realizing that Charlie probably didn’t have a very good reading span."

Ahahah remind you of someone?

And my favourite paragraph would have to be this: Immediately we heard barking, and Hagrid opened the door while trying to hold Fang back. Now, after how Hagrid had saved our butts in the forest last night, I felt I could officially trust him not to step on me. No more Hagrid-phobia for me."

Awesome job, Sar Pams!