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Old 01-27-2012, 06:13 AM   #146 (permalink)
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Hey Jazz, very good posts, as is normal for you. I think I would fall out of my chair if you ever wrote anything but great like you always do.

It was good seeing Severus again, although he seemed very sad to see her there. I mean it's like he was exceptionally happy to see her, but was sorry she was going with them. He knows what is in store for her I'm sure.

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The busy platform was bustling around them and Izabella could feel eyes boring into her, watching the exchange closely. She nodded and turned quickly leading her brother and Lucius along the platform towards the wall.
Go back!!!!!!!!!!! Those are Sirius's eyes boring through you. But then, I'm sure I don't need to tell her that; she already knows I'm sure.

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What had Lucius and Severus hurried off to do? But that wasn't the worst part. Izabella had an inkling of what was happening in the drawing room downstairs, but she didn't seem to mind. She only hoped it would be over soon so she could see Lucius again. She chewed her lip hard, her brow furrowing as she remembered Abraxas' words.

'A fine young lady...' Or maybe just the type of lady she was expected to be. However Izabella found herself thinking; why not?
Poor poor Izabella, she should have listened to her worries, and gotten out of there.

Great work Jazz, I'll be watching for your next.
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