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Ladybug · 10-26-2011, 08:52 PM

I'm So Sorry For The Wait On This Chapter. Its So Short :'(

SPOILER!!: Replies

Dedicated to my three close friends; Laila, Maura and Stef

Created; Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

The young girl extended her hand until the cold water was folded over it in a wave. She didn't mind the cold, once upon a time she would have but not anymore. The sky was clear today unlike some of the past few days and she was glad. The rain annoyed her. Taking her hand from the water she stood, wiping the wet hand against her blue jeans. The scene around her was pretty basic considering where she was.

By her feet sat the fast flowing river, she watched as the water fought over the rocks and carried on. All around her stood trees, thick and close together casting a scary shadow amongst them. In those trees sat her camp or what was her camp. She didn't carry very much in her bag.

The young girl no longer went to any villages for fear of meeting him again. He was everywhere, her friend, her old friend. The thought of him brought tears to her eyes and she tried to push it away. He was in her dreams amongst all the others that were important to her. 'It does not do to dwell on dreams' a dear friend had once told her to that is what she did.

A rustling sound to her left made her girl whip round with urgency. Not far from where she stood a deer searched the forest floor for food ignoring her. As she continued to watch it lifted its head to stare, drinking her in before slowly trotting towards her without a fear in the world. As it neared the young girl took in its appearance, young like her with a white streak going the length of one side of it's face. Stopping, the deer looked into her eyes before turning to drink from the river.

Breathing slightly she extended her hand to stroke the fur on top of its back but before she could make contact the deer jolted away from her and stopped at the edge of the trees where it waited for her. With a slight pause she grabbed her bag from the dirt ground and followed the deer as it led her away from the fast flowing water.

The world got darker around her the further the deer led her into the woods, after a while she found it harder to see. A twig snapped to her right and she snapped her head that way in search for something that wasn't there. The young animal did not stop. Breathing deeply to swallow her fear she turned her head forward to see the young deer further ahead then she thought. With a bolt she raced after it kicking up mud and breaking twigs as she went.

She was led further and further in, the trees grew closer and closer - more closer then they first were - together shooting a looming shadow over the world below. She dared not speak in case she alerted any close animals instead she followed the young animal into the unknown.

10-26-2011, 08:52 PM	#83 (permalink)
Ladybug Graphorn Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: University. Posts: 17,325 Hogwarts RPG Name: Enya Mayberry Fourth Year	Workaholic \|\| HOGwart \| iloveyou. \|\| SnowQueenEviee. I'm So Sorry For The Wait On This Chapter. Its So Short :'( SPOILER!!: Replies Quote: Originally Posted by narnia_potter Oooooohhhhh, I can't wait to see what happens! Looks exciting, and I sure hope McGonagall doesn't get hurt. Great job! -Rachel I'll try and keep our precious McGonagall safe (: I'm glad you liked the chapter and I hope you like this chapter just as much. Quote: Originally Posted by Stethoscope12 This chapter confuses me some what!!! I'm hoping the next clears it all up!!! I want to know what Minerva is planning Alyssa I'm sorry to confuse you! but sadly this next chapter wont clear up your confusion. I guess I'll have to see what new devious plan the cunning Professor may come up with Quote: Originally Posted by bonnieginnyfan1 Very interesting chappie! Your chappie's are always so detailed! <3 ♥Stef♥ Thanks for reading Stef and thank you for the comment! I hope you love the upcoming chapters just as much as the past ones. Quote: Originally Posted by Connie Hey Eviee, I'm happy you have this new chapter for us. I enjoyed it and I'm really worried about McGonagall. I hope she doesn't get caught. You brought up a thought I've always wondered about. I wondered if there might be secret meetings with the loyal professors. Not big meetings, but encouragement meetings to keep them there and help the students, and also I bet they wasn't allowed to leave anyway. I bet they would have been saught after and done away with if they left. Oh yeah, I'm also curious who wrote the note. Guess I'll have to wait and see. I'll be watching for your next. Connie, I always love reading your detailed comments I'm sure McGonagall will be fine, just as long as she treads carefully. And did I? I personally have never had that thought before but it came to me as I was writing, guess great minds think alike (: Yeah I did however always wonder why the Professor's never left or rose up against the Carrows and the headmaster. Hmm may have to look into that. Yeah the writer of the note comes into the next chapter with Snape ~~not this one below~~ Thank You for reading again. Quote: Originally Posted by Mordanyes T'was an awesome chapter! Thank You! <33 hope you like the next one. Quote: Originally Posted by WitchLight27 Well, I'm definitely coming back to figure out what happens next. That was an awesome chapter Eviee! PAMS! Thank You! I so glad you liked the chapter and I look forward to any future comment! Quote: Originally Posted by Droo Very nice! Keep posting! Thank You! Quote: Originally Posted by LillyJames It is great! Yay for the teachers, being brave and protecting the students... The note has me flustered as well, is it a trap?! Anyway, PAMS I do love the Professors a lot! So brave I say! nods Hmm, a trap? maybe... Quote: Originally Posted by Magical Soul EVIE! :tackle: You know I enjoy your writing so much and I love this particular fanfic for the sake of ol' snape. LAILA! Your here! dances Thank You for reading! I hope you love the rest of the chapters! Dedicated to my three close friends; Laila, Maura and Stef Created; Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop The young girl extended her hand until the cold water was folded over it in a wave. She didn't mind the cold, once upon a time she would have but not anymore. The sky was clear today unlike some of the past few days and she was glad. The rain annoyed her. Taking her hand from the water she stood, wiping the wet hand against her blue jeans. The scene around her was pretty basic considering where she was. By her feet sat the fast flowing river, she watched as the water fought over the rocks and carried on. All around her stood trees, thick and close together casting a scary shadow amongst them. In those trees sat her camp or what was her camp. She didn't carry very much in her bag. The young girl no longer went to any villages for fear of meeting him again. He was everywhere, her friend, her old friend. The thought of him brought tears to her eyes and she tried to push it away. He was in her dreams amongst all the others that were important to her. 'It does not do to dwell on dreams' a dear friend had once told her to that is what she did. A rustling sound to her left made her girl whip round with urgency. Not far from where she stood a deer searched the forest floor for food ignoring her. As she continued to watch it lifted its head to stare, drinking her in before slowly trotting towards her without a fear in the world. As it neared the young girl took in its appearance, young like her with a white streak going the length of one side of it's face. Stopping, the deer looked into her eyes before turning to drink from the river. Breathing slightly she extended her hand to stroke the fur on top of its back but before she could make contact the deer jolted away from her and stopped at the edge of the trees where it waited for her. With a slight pause she grabbed her bag from the dirt ground and followed the deer as it led her away from the fast flowing water. The world got darker around her the further the deer led her into the woods, after a while she found it harder to see. A twig snapped to her right and she snapped her head that way in search for something that wasn't there. The young animal did not stop. Breathing deeply to swallow her fear she turned her head forward to see the young deer further ahead then she thought. With a bolt she raced after it kicking up mud and breaking twigs as she went. She was led further and further in, the trees grew closer and closer - more closer then they first were - together shooting a looming shadow over the world below. She dared not speak in case she alerted any close animals instead she followed the young animal into the unknown. __________________ ♥♥♥♥♥__________Chapter 17 of "A Broken Wing" Is up now!___________♥ ___________________Look Who's Back. Beware.