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harita · 10-24-2011, 05:27 AM

hey nice post...

But I think there needs to be one correction in the last sentence...don't get me wrong...

Quote:

she mumbled softly, her fear escalating as she excited.

I think it should be exited...

10-24-2011, 05:27 AM	#8 (permalink)
harita Mooncalf Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 6,309 Hogwarts RPG Name: isabella Macmillan Sixth Year	hey nice post... But I think there needs to be one correction in the last sentence...don't get me wrong... Quote: she mumbled softly, her fear escalating as she excited. I think it should be exited...