Hey Allison, great work. I wonder what might have happened if Abby and Draco would have been able to talk. It was this part of the story that I felt sorry for Draco. I still didn't like him, but I did feel sorry for him.
Speaking of feeling sorry for someone, Ron is pitiful.He sure does need more confidence in himself. Harry plans on helping him though,
And it's sad that his plan will only work if Hermione sees it and makes a fuss about it. I'm sure harry didn't think it would turn out the way it does though. So much for good intentions. I'm anxious to read the next chapter Allison, I'll be watching for it.