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Old 10-07-2011, 08:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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First to post!

The Entropits (both the writer and the character) are back! Yeah!

Loved reading this chapter again, this time with the new added content. I think I'm going to highly enjoy this re-write.

Quote:
“And then, one day, I send this rock up to the top of the hill,” Alexander said.
“To the top of the hill?” Dumbledore repeated.
“He was the only rock in the grass” Alexander said. “There are plenty of rocks up there, so I sent it at the top, so he could be with his friends”.
“That was nice of you, Alexander,” Dumbledore said with a smile. “Very nice indeed”.
This little bit has always been one of my favourite of the chapter. You captured the mind of a five year old quite well there and also show us that Alex has a good heart.

Looking forward to the next parts mate!
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